Thursday, May 26, 2011

Still Waters


Illusions in still waters are striving to flare,

Tied and lonely, they conquer despair,

A hint of a ripple and a stream of hope,

Illuminates the drab and expels loath,

Thoughts ablaze with vision of the day,

Across the stagnant, exclaiming hurray!!!

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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 27, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    Lovely...every word seems so related to the theme..and I must say the prose narrates the tale of your thoughts.. and certainly a ripple of optimism after the grey and dismal stagnation in your life.. thoughts definitely seem to flow like a brook now... keep it flowing this way and dont let the logs of pessimism block its way.

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  2. Himani A. GuptaMay 27, 2011 at 10:57 AM

    Thanks a lot Priya. Yep shall keep doing my best...

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  3. RosyMay 27, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    quite immersible..keep it up!! :)

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  4. Himani A. GuptaMay 27, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    thnx ROSE!

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  5. AnonymousJune 19, 2011 at 12:15 PM

    Thats cool... Be floated through your dreams... Nice post. keep it up.

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  6. Himani A. GuptaJanuary 17, 2012 at 4:46 PM

    thanks Neseeef :)

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